Excellent writing, lengthy story, your choices matter in the story. One big fault however is that the save function just doesn't work. It is very annoying to not be able to load previous saves and have to restart from the beginning after having made a mistake. To the maker of the game I would suggest having a look at another cyoa game called Magium, it's save functionality is quite good. Overall great game, chefs kiss/10
Its great, but there are sooooo many brain dead grammar mistakes through out the story. Whoever proof reads these needs to do it again
Over all good game the endings was good enough out of the ones i've seen not the best but definitely not the worst
Prety good game a lttle to much time betwen choices but overal pretty good game
Phenomenal
I really enjoyed the story it had a lot of different out comes and was just fun in general.I would really like to know if there is a part two
Good fantasy game
Good story with varipus twists.
I've given two stars for an amazing effort. The passion and attention to historical detail is very respectable, however the writing is completely atrocious. In the story, there is text that reads like "he suddenly felt a sudden punch to the back of his head". I was taught in highschool not to use the same adjective twice on the same subject, especially in a different tense. However the author makes this mistake multiple times, which draws the story out farther than needed. I'd like a refund?
Waiting on a sequel loved it